Me and You, You and I

Me and You, You and I

A Poem by Sukhmeet Singh
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Awesome love poem, hope you guys like it

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           Oh, Yeah, you know I love ya, but you got, but you gotta, only 1 percent, as you are beauty, I am nothin,
               There, you should'a know ya, you are the most beautiful, I could'a you know, searched my whole life,
               But, maw lov'en only ya, if only I could'a been as, lovin as ya, but, you gatta know, you got no equal,
               The best gift, for ya, is look'en at yourself, thats why ya gotta love, the mirror, it show a beautiful gal,
               Know this, if I got you, I would have the most, the most beautiful girl ever, but, to keep ya save, I will,

               Just to prove it, I, I, I will give up all my lust, just for ya, ya gotta know, I, I, I only want you safe, this,
               I, I, I will do anything, except change my faith, or remove my hair, as it is very lovely to, me,
              But, all other requests, I will haply do, even if I had to take a light'in bolt, or get thousands of bullets,
              All, I should not do, is, I will not cut my hairs, or change my faith, as it is also valuable to me, 
              I, I, I will do anything else to win, ya heart, just give a request, all I want is you, This is your true value,
              
            We, we, we have a special bond, I still love you, whatever you wear, it just becomes beauty, you know,                 I gave up, on all lust for you, now, even if I can't have a relationship with ya, understand, I want, 
           I want, I want to be your good friend, because love is not about dating, it's about caring about the love,
          This, this, this is the biggest dream I have, and that is caring about you, just as you care for me,
         Ya, I mean you, I really want to give you great respect, you not ya, just want to say, I love you, do you me?

© 2012 Sukhmeet Singh


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Honestly, I've never liked the 'ya, gotta, lovin, should'a' stuff so that sort of turned me off of the poem. But I like the point you make in it, that was nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sukhmeet Singh

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your opinion, at least you appreciate my style
Very nice sentiment


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sukhmeet Singh

8 Years Ago

Thank you

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Added on September 29, 2012
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Tags: Love, romance, you, lust, I, me, question