He is Perfect

He is Perfect

A Poem by writingcrazy55555

He holds her gently,

securely,

in his protective arms.

He caresses her caringly,

never selfishly.

He looks at her

tenderly

with his

emerald eyes.

He kisses her ever so

softly,

as if her lips

are made of glass

and he’s afraid

they will break.

He respects her,

loves her for

who she is,

never stepping

out of line.

She loves him.

 

© 2012 writingcrazy55555


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I love this. It's very soft and romantic. It makes we want to be gentle with every body :) It makes me want men to be like this in real life ;-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Yes that would make the world a lot better :)
This is good. Well done. Your a great poet.

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Thanks prepre!
It's interesting. It clashes with my perception of love and I can respect that.

Posted 7 Years Ago


sweet poem. I liked it. It was refreshing to read about someone truly in love. It made me feel like there was still hope in the world :) Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
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awww cute

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Thank you

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Added on July 13, 2012
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I am a writing crazy person (hence the name), for no other reason besides the fact that I love writing! I love to read too, and LOVE the Harry Potter series! I write whenever I have free time, and I a.. more..

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