Memories

Memories

A Poem by writingcrazy55555
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A poem I wrote today.

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Memories

 Are like

Broken shards of glass,

Where I can only see

A small part

Of myself,

Maybe just

An eye

Or a strand

Of hair.

Their jagged,

Uneven edges

Look as if

The pieces could

Never

Fit

Together,

But they do.

Each piece fits

Together,

 Like a puzzle.

And in that puzzle,

I can see my entire face,

Staring back at it.

They create

A complete picture

Of myself,

An image.

Memories.

 

© 2012 writingcrazy55555


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A very good piece. I enjoyed it, thank you for sharing it with us.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I liked the way you separated this and made me pause at certain times. It was effective and I liked this a lot. There was a lot of truth in this poem in a way I've never heard it before.

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it!
Wow...this is so good! Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
Nice metaphor and flow to it^^

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

No problem :)
I liked the message behind this. It's as if our past makes us who we are no matter how terrible it was, everything we do molds us into who we are.

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Yes, our past determines our identity. Without it, we would be nonexistant.
I love this! I have no criticism, this piece is perfect. I love the way you make a whole new line for important words to emphasize the meaning.

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you like it! :)
I love how you repeat Memories twice. Once at the beginning and the end. The poem flows nicely and makes it easy to read. I read this poem to my brother. He ignored me once I said this is your poem. Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Thanks prepre!
This was really good. I like how your stanzas are short, but they feel like their a lead-in. Really good!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I loved the flow. very easy read. I loved the way it starts and ends with the same word. Memories.

Globy
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Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Thanks!

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Added on July 14, 2012
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I am a writing crazy person (hence the name), for no other reason besides the fact that I love writing! I love to read too, and LOVE the Harry Potter series! I write whenever I have free time, and I a.. more..

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