The World is Your Canvas

The World is Your Canvas

A Poem by writingcrazy55555
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A poem I wrote today.

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You are a painter,

Holding a dainty

Paintbrush in your

Capable hands.

The world is spread out

 Before you.

Some areas are

In color,

But others are dark

And have not been

Touched with a

Paintbrush yet.

You carefully

Dip your

Paintbrush in the pallet

And come up

With exuberant colors

And paint away

Until there is

No more darkness.

You are the painter,

The paintbrush is

Your kindness

And the world is

Your canvas.

Go paint.

© 2012 writingcrazy55555


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I really enjoyed this. I love the rhythm and the message its successfully getting across. The length of each line, I find, help the reader.
But I must say one thing, how you make every line begin with a capital letter seems to disturb the flow. I think if you only made the lines after the end of a sentence capitalize it would be easier to read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

I know. I don't like it either, but my computer automatically does that. :( oh well. But thanks for .. read more
SheActsLikeSummer

7 Years Ago

Ha ha, no problem. And yeah, my computer normally does that too by if you press [shift] and then [en.. read more



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wOw! all of your poems are inspiring to me and this is the best by far. You have a gift for seeing things for what they truly are. Keep writing things like this, I will read them!

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
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Amazing!! Behind this simplicity is a great message! Nice poem :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this. I love the rhythm and the message its successfully getting across. The length of each line, I find, help the reader.
But I must say one thing, how you make every line begin with a capital letter seems to disturb the flow. I think if you only made the lines after the end of a sentence capitalize it would be easier to read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

I know. I don't like it either, but my computer automatically does that. :( oh well. But thanks for .. read more
SheActsLikeSummer

7 Years Ago

Ha ha, no problem. And yeah, my computer normally does that too by if you press [shift] and then [en.. read more
I like this poem. The title hooked me in. This is really simple yet beautiful at the same time. Well done. Nice write. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


writingcrazy55555

7 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
I always appreciate comments!

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 14, 2012
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Tags: poem, poetry, imagery, art, kind, kindness, painter, paint

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I am a writing crazy person (hence the name), for no other reason besides the fact that I love writing! I love to read too, and LOVE the Harry Potter series! I write whenever I have free time, and I a.. more..

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