Embers Of Time Book 1: Impression

This is probably the fifth (or so) book I have attempted to write, but i'm hoping that by getting some real constructive criticism and advice, I'll be able to finally finish it. I will be writing this as I go, so updates could take days, weeks, or even months depending on what is going on in my life. I hope you all enjoy, and let me know what you think!

EDIT 8/04/10 - I will be changing the Prologue soon... I decided on a different way to do this book. I don't want to spoil too much, but I can tell you that this will now be a series of 6 books - each of which will be in a point of view of one of the six different teens in the group. I am still working out the glitches and outlining the whole series, but I can tell you that it will be very, VERY cool! :-)