You see my eyes but do you see me??

You see my eyes but do you see me??

A Poem by ♥SunkissAngel♥

You see my eyes
That light shade of blue.

You see my eyes,
As they look at you.

You see my eyes,
as i cry.

You see my eyes,
as i die.

You see my eyes,
turn from blue to green.

You see my eyes,
but they can really
never be seen.

You see my eyes,
as i walk away.

You see my eyes,
as night turns in to day.

All though you see my eyes
You really do not see me
My eyes are only a fraction
of what you can see.

So take a good look,
look deep inside,
to see more than,
my eyes.

~SK





© 2010 ♥SunkissAngel♥


Author's Note

♥SunkissAngel♥
Pleases leave a comment and hope you like it..

~SK

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WOW this is just plain wonderful. Such an enjoyable read, love the flow and rhyme scheme as well.


Posted 9 Years Ago


OH!! I really liked this, because there is more than meets the eye!! great poem!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh I liked this! The notion of looking beyond the mere physical being, into the depth of one's soul. Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow! Interesting write! I really liked the idea behind this poem, and thought that it was executed pretty well. The repetition worked really well in creating the right tone for this piece, with the entire poem being summed up perfectly in the last stanza. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice write

Posted 9 Years Ago


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i did like it it shows a deeper beauty to the soul rather than beauty of physical and seeing pain but actually feeling drawn by the depth of wuts in ur eyes not wuts on them good write

Posted 9 Years Ago


WONDERFUL!!! this means a lot to me...i feel the same way

Posted 9 Years Ago


really wonderful style and so nice..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really enjoyed this read..great write ^_^

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You're very talented. I love the feel of this poem. Amazing write. I love it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Bonjour!! Hey every one you may know me but if not my name is samantha but i go by sam, Sunkiss, or Pepper sometimes. I am 15 years old and is currently in a wonderful relation ship. I have two si.. more..

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