Concrete Angles!! Stop the abuse..

Concrete Angles!! Stop the abuse..

A Poem by ♥SunkissAngel♥

You hear screams in the distance

But yet you keep moving on.

You see the wounds,

But yet you keep moving on.

You know what is going on,

But yet you still keep moving on.

The fear is in plain sight
and you see it on that
little face,

But why do you keep moving on
i do not know.

How long,
how long can you go
ignoring that.

Tell me ,
what will it take,
 for you to see it.

Does a life need to  be

  Before any one see it.

or will it be saved?

That is your choice,
so  choose wisely.

© 2010 ♥SunkissAngel♥

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this is really strong writing! great job! its sad to think how many people ignore it when they see it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Thats strong and provokes not only thoughts, but actions...Great!

Posted 9 Years Ago

This was a really powerful write. You handled a really real and really raw subject in such an elegant and moving way, and I thought that it made for a great piece. The fact that you seemed to address the reader and society directly made the message that you were sending all the more hard-hitting. A strong message and an emotional personal plea. Great work,

Posted 9 Years Ago

this is touching great job

Posted 9 Years Ago

sad.yet nicely written ..great job ^_^

Posted 9 Years Ago

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i can see your point of view in this poem i will say alot of people move on because if they ignore the problem then it seems to not exist ignorance is bliss it takes the strong to pay attention to the bad things good write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Such a sad write here.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very sad but a great write

Posted 9 Years Ago

aww this poem is so sad. but it was very well written

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on November 3, 2010
Last Updated on November 3, 2010



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