Silent killer.

Silent killer.

A Poem by ♥SunkissAngel♥

The silent killer

stalks you in the night

footsteps echo

which gives you a fright.

You know some ones there

just a couple steps behind you

but you seem to not care.

The silent killer

get ready to strike

and takes  stabs

to the right

You fall to the ground
 
squirming with fright,

That silent killer,

 in the night.

© 2010 ♥SunkissAngel♥


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wow~~such a haunting poem--wonderful~~~!!!

:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


What a creepy frightful creative poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is awesome

Posted 9 Years Ago


creepy but great poem!! the rhyming is almost like the rhythm of the foot steps as the silent killer comes to get u!!! GREAT poem!!! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kind of haunting write well put together awesome imagery

Posted 9 Years Ago


0.o {{looks around for the killer}} nice write ^_^

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oooh, that was definitely a creepy write! I liked the atmosphere of the poem, and the way in which you wrote it using short sentences, which seemed to evoke a sense of mystery and hesitation. Aveira's right though; you need to go back and proof-read. For such an awesome concept, it would be a shame if you didn't. :P Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like your idea, and your kind of haunting voice in the poem, but you need to do some damage control. You have some grammar issues that are hindering how the poem should sound, like "footsteps" is one word, "someone's", and the biggest being your mix up of "witch" and "which". This is a creepy poem you're going for, and you need to clean those up before it can really hit home.

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice write

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Bonjour!! Hey every one you may know me but if not my name is samantha but i go by sam, Sunkiss, or Pepper sometimes. I am 15 years old and is currently in a wonderful relation ship. I have two si.. more..

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