Silent killer.

The silent killer

stalks you in the night

footsteps echo

which gives you a fright.

You know some ones there

just a couple steps behind you

but you seem to not care.

The silent killer

get ready to strike

and takes  stabs

to the right

You fall to the ground
 
squirming with fright,

That silent killer,

 in the night.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

An excellent write, a great fright piece. So much could be interpreted from the use of the silent killer. You did a great job leaving the inner interpretation to the reader, but made it clear enough to evoke the emotions you desired. Great work.

Regards,

Matthew

[Sugar Plum ♥]

so good! this killer reminds me of the death, or the fear itself...So nice written!

[Dark Empress]

Ooo...creepy. Love it. It gave me chills :)