On My Own

On My Own

A Poem by surayne

What more do you want from me.

I have nothing left, dont you see.

I've been up and down to prove to you,

That I only need you in my world.

You where to blind.

I see so clearly now.

But why did you leave me.

Am I just like foot prints in the snow.

Leave me here.

Cold and alone.

I'll make it all on my own.

© 2008 surayne


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Here's something that many can relate to. Nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


May you find all of the strength to stand alone!!! He may not know what he had until it is gone. You show that you have strength to move on in this poem. First you feel angry, then sad. And one beautiful day, you are stronger. You never lose that strength.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 15, 2008
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surayne
surayne

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Hello, my name is Amanda. I'm 18 years old. I work two jobs. :p I'm a pretty easy person to get along with. I like all sorts of things. Anything retro. =] I'v been through quite alot. But no m.. more..

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A Poem by surayne