A Poem by Susan14

wrote this for the person i love


I've known you for only

a short period of time,

but I feel as if

I've known you forever.


I tremble with joy

at your every touch.

The feel of your hand taking mine-

I want you to hold it forever.


My knees grow weak

in your loving arms.

I want to stay there,

I want you to hold me forever.


I glow with happiness

every time you're near.

I want you to hear me now,

I want to be with you forever.


My body melts

with every kiss you give,

Just the thought of your lips on mine-

I want you to kiss me forever.


My heart jumps

to know how much you care.

Knowing that it is so much more-

I want you to love me forever.♥

© 2010 Susan14

Author's Note

what do you think, ignore grammer problems

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This is beautiful and vivid. I can relate in past "loves" that I experienced. Great write, friend. I really enjoyed this one.

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