You

You

A Poem by Annabel Lee

Its on the back of my knees
Its on the tip of my tongue 
Its on the rim of a dream
Its in the along.

Its in the blue in my hair,
in the shine on my ring,
in the smell of my skin, 
its in everything.

Things forgotten,
things past,
things remembered,
dreams that didnt last.

Its in my mind,
in my personality,
its in yours too,
even in your nationality.

Can you feel it?
Like I do?
I see in in the shows I watch,
All I know is true.

Its that moment before the dew descends from the grass,
Its that moment when you stare at the doorknob and wonder what lies beyond.
Its a hand hovering over an object to feel the energy,
Its some land filled with prophecy.

Its my ex-boyfriend,
Its my favourite character,
Its a word said,
Its a book I read.

I feel it in my gaze,
I hear it in my dreams,
I feel it weaving
In the fabric of my jeans.

Its so odd,
its so perfect,
its
just 
you.

© 2011 Annabel Lee


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Splendid writing, i can say i know all about these emotions, keep at it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


OMG. STORY OF MY LIFE. And you probably know what I mean, too...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Is this like when you love someone you start to see them in every face (or everywhere)? I don't know, but this is an enjoyable read. Well written!

Posted 12 Years Ago



Very nice...exceptional love tale. I can imagine this one being written beneath a weeping willow tree...

Good work...!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderful poem with excellent imagery!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this so much :) I know the feeling, and the way it is described really creates an emotional atmosphere...the flow is nice, wonderful sixth stanza there. great piece :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Annabel Lee
Annabel Lee

Indianapolis, IN



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i write short stories and poems and junk i draw occasionally and like music and webcomics and cartoons i'm 15 and forget what people put in these boxes more..

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