Your Special Ways

Your Special Ways

A Poem by Susan
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Kyrielle Sonnet

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My silent heartbeat, strengthened in your arms
As breathing quickens, welcome boyish charms
Melt into me and set my soul ablaze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways


With pleasing sentiments caressing me
Awake sensations, begging to be free
Release forever empty yesterdays
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways


Between the rise and breathless free-fall, when...
My urging's heat persuades you; once again
Collapse together under starlit haze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways


My silent heartbeat, strengthened in your arms
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways.






© 2017 Susan


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Very sweet You are a romantic

Posted 2 Years Ago


Susan

2 Years Ago

Very much so!
enjoyed these wonderful words of affection and what a gorgeous picture to go along with it..

the world needs more of this right now, well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Between the rise and breathless free-fall, when...
My urging's heat persuades you; once again
Collapse together under starlit haze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways

These words,they could drown a soul completely in a world of ecstasy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Susan

2 Years Ago

well thank you for taking the time to read and send this wonderful review!!! i do appreciate it!
boygene borice

2 Years Ago

welcome :)
Oayk, well it was meant to be constructive in comment. All the best.

Posted 2 Years Ago


this given stanza's quite fascinating, & certainly claiming the longings of one's true-need of love:

Between the rise and breathless free-fall, when...
My urging's heat persuades you; once again
Collapse together under starlit haze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways

very beautifully penned out. short. simple. and well polished with romanticism. nicely inked!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Susan

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for such a sweet review!! I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review!!
'Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways.'

The repeat of that line adds a touch of mystery.. one wonders and smiles!

Fine meter, discreet elegance, beautiful words, blissful intentions. What more can your darling need!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Susan

2 Years Ago

Such a lovely review!! Thank you!
Simply gorgeous, Susan ... whew!
Wondrously alluring to the senses ~ through the brilliance of this heart-thumping Kyrielle Sonnet, you've penned the perfect iambic beat to match the heart's yearning song, ache's sensual dreams, and life's primal urge for close affection.
Whomever the gloriously blessed guy is you penned this poem of enthrallment to (if he's read this) must surely have every fiber of his being kneeling in blissful gratitude, planning a romantic interlude for you both to share.

I love it ... color, font, nice presentation, illustration, creativity, emotive force, power, and tenderness, etc; all combine to embrace and sweep the spirit vividly into your moment, as excellent poetry should. I am more amazed and impressed by your growing skills with each of your compositions I'm privileged to read.

Thank you, Susan, for such an incomparably joyous treat! ~ Richard

(now, techy stuff: to preserve mind-eye continuity and keep the feel of warm flow intact, use single spaces between verses, title and illustration; for a finished, proficient composition, work on proper grammar by eliminating all unnecessary, improper capitalizations; and, incomplete punctuation lends an unfinished/unpolished appearance and feel; eliminate as many "the" and "and" filler words as possible, using [instead] words that express poetic nuance and flavor; contact me if you'd like more information on technical issues and/or on my comments, as I am always happy to lend a helping hand … smile*)


Grade: 90/100

Posted 2 Years Ago


Susan

2 Years Ago

I don't ansewr well i guess..i do appreciate your reviews
Richard 🍃

2 Years Ago

You answer beautifully … smiles 'n hugs!
Susan

2 Years Ago

:-))))))))))
this poem has a great flow and rhythm to it. love the ongoing theme, I like that you kept the last line of each stanza the same, it really worked for this poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Susan

2 Years Ago

Thank you for such a great review!!

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