Take Me ~

Take Me!

Strong hands

softly caress along ...

surround in wanting embrace,

oh-MY!

Commands,

whisp'ring sighs ~ sweet love's song;

'pon every garment ... unlace;

let fly!

Our plans’

hot passions naught prolong.

Quick! Close the door,  just in case …

outcry!

Author's Note

STEPLADDER
an original poetic form created by:
Robert "Bad Bunny" Trakofler ©2019

A brilliant form, worthy of the most skilled writer’s efforts,
Stepladder is composed of 3 Quatrain verses minimum.
Line counts are: 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, etc.
Rhyme scheme is: a,b,c,d a,b,c,d a,b,c,d

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing words. You made the reader believe the thoughts and the emotions felt. Thank you Susan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Chris]

Sweetly presented and challenge met...Heart-full work.

[Susan 🦋]

:-) Thank you Chris.

[Richard🖌]

Yee-doggies, Susan 🌻
You really took Bad Bunny's form and made it sing and dance with warmth and sweet sensuality, spot-on rhymes, excellent imagery, and perfect counts, all in powerful scintillation to the senses … I know he's gonna love it, too, just as I do.
Isn't his Stepladder form a wonderful challenge and loads of fun to compose in. It's the most original and entertaining form I've come across in a long time, and it's contemporary to the hilt … what a picture choice, too, to set the ohhh-so tantalizing mood. ; )

Ya really done super good, Lady Poet … a big HUG to You! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Susan 🦋]

Aw thank you Richard for this awesome review. As always, much appreciated. THANK YOU for introducing me to this form...it is a challenging form, but wort the effort. The slightly naughty theme was just for fun. :-) Thanks again ( what else ya got for me to try)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

not a big "form" fan...but i like this one...the way it was put together created a nice momentum....
and it is sensual without being blatant...it suggests...
and we feel it.
nicely done, Susan,
j.

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you!!! Just having a little fun with "Bad Bunny's" new form... hope all is well with you.

[Robert Trakofler]

I love the hands image! The unfolding of your hands is delicious Susan it sends a wave of tingle to my tongue as I read your lines aloud. You caressed the form with a most sensuous lovely voice Susan

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you for this lovely review! I so enjoyed working with your form! Ah yes! that image truly does set the mood ;-) I certainly look forward to trying this wonderful and challenging form again. :-)