Joy's Waking Song

Joy's Waking Song

A Poem by Susan 🌺



Each moment's rising woes belong
beneath a fleeting starlit night;
in you, I hear joy's waking song …
dire darkness withers far from sight.

What magic lies within your soul,
dares harness this unquiet mind?
A patient sculptor melding whole,
unveiling wonders -- redefined.

Like holy water 'pon my skin,
your gently-cleansing touches, rain.
All worries fade away … wherein,
love chimes in echoing sustain.

In you, I've found my hiding place;
its restful haven shelters me.
As morning's sun reveals true grace,
lone sparrow's wings soar high 'n free.

How glorious views soon appear,
enlightens wisdom truly told;
Tis looking glass beams brightly clear,
soft teary eyes of speckled gold.

© 2021 Susan 🌺


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A sweet, romantic poem, full of positivity and love! When love really works it is truly wonderful. We all need love!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Thanks for sharing your having a peaceful person to lighten your load in life. I hope you are blessed to have that person with you all your life. Most never get to experience such a blessing.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Susan 🌺

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Jo for your beautiful review. Indeed blessed 😊
Just beautiful, beautiful, worded, or sung.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

2 Months Ago

Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review! 😊
Lovely oh so lovely artwork..
Which is lovely oh so lovely for your
poem.
Really wonderful poem..
Lisa, now in Spain

Posted 2 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

2 Months Ago

Thank you Lisa for this review. 😊
Lisasview

2 Months Ago

You are most welcome!
Pure beauty at its best! The poem is heartfelt and poetically lovely!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

3 Months Ago

Aww :-) this one is special to me! Glad you found it so beautiful! :-)
KAREN

3 Months Ago

You're welcome!
‘Joy’s Waking Song’
Such a lovely poem to read to begin this morning with and get the day off to a bright, positive start.

Thank you,

Lathen

Posted 4 Months Ago


This really is a superb write here, excellence in form. I am one who loves the rhyming techniques of writing, Your write has captured pure beauty. So wonderfully penned

Posted 6 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

5 Months Ago

Aw Kenzie! Thank you very much!
With all the seemingly never ending unpleasantness that takes place, pieces like this are a foil to it all and what more represents an escape from all the world's woes than a free flight of birds
Very nicely done

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🌺

8 Months Ago

I missed this!! So sorry! Thank you for the sweet review! :)
Firstly I'm greeted by the beautiful illustration: a sweep of movement up, up and away! Then your opening words leads this reader's mind and heart into an increasing place of love and hope. As for your use of words and meter, Susan. you've given the senses a precious something that few others could ~ honour to language in Life. This really is a superb, gentle yet, inspiring poem.

' What magic lies within your soul, ~ dares harness this unquiet mind? ~ A patient sculptor melding whole, ~ unveiling wonders -- redefined. ' Beautiful!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🌺

1 Year Ago

Aw you! You have no idea how much this review made my day!! I've been peeking at it all day. This po.. read more
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

I meant every one, wish my words had read warmer because i felt gently comforted, thus warm and con.. read more
Susan 🌺

1 Year Ago

and that makes me smile :-)
This is just pure love, to me. Romantic - yes, but written with gratitude too.

Nice.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🌺

1 Year Ago

You got it! :-) Thanks for reading!! Much appreciated.

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