My Sparkle

My Sparkle

A Poem by Susan 🌺
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Sonnet

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Quite suddenly, a twink'ling light appears;

perhaps, 'twas destined or mere happenstance.

Amazed, warmth's radiant glow slowly nears …

life's providence re-shapes my circumstance.


Embraced, love cradles this bedeviled soul

in blissful credence; peacefully, I rest.

Illuminating broken pieces whole,

upon a wonderlust, star-laden, quest.


What karma gifted now reflects within;

laced silhouette, with silken threads of gold.

Surrounding whosoever looks therein …

surreal, inspiring beauty ~ brave and bold.


Stars falling, fade upon first breath of day,

through grateful hands, my sparkle ~ slips away.

© 2021 Susan 🌺


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Your write is so beautiful, As I love the style of a sonnet... I found this piece very lovely.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Susan 🌺

1 Month Ago

Thank you Kenzie for reading and for this lovely review!
You educated me with a couple of words in this poem of yours, thank you for that. I also really enjoyed the imagery and writing manner. Not all poems sound like poetry, but this is one of those that really do. tyfs

Posted 2 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

2 Months Ago

Well thank you very much!! :-)
I have been trying to reach out to others, I am glad I did, This is such a wonderful, poetic piece. I am a big fan of rhyming poetry and I really enjoyed this. Hope you have a nice day.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

2 Months Ago

Thank you kayley for yet another lovely review!
Dear Susan, I am new to this site and to reviewing other's work(s). I really liked this poem as it cast an almost hypnotic trance over me. I loved the imagery and the picture you painted. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

3 Months Ago

Hi Diane, Thank you for taking the time to read and review! I'm happy you enjoyed this little poem :.. read more
As Gene points out, you couldn't have picked a better image to harmonize with your words. This feels like a lullaby to read, reaching out & making friends with the stars (((HUGS)))

Posted 3 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

3 Months Ago

You are too sweet! Thank you for the review!! :))))
Aw Susan, pure poetry, which is actually hard to do.
Do the stars bring a loved one to us, well at least for a time.
Used to love looking at the stars, now no longer possible as they appear to have disappeared out of Britain.
Life and death brings the start to the new day, and forward we go as life is intended.


Posted 3 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

3 Months Ago

New day new start... thank you for taking the time to read and review!! Much appreciated :-)))
Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

Pleasure, hope things are well with you.
awwwwww! very very enchanting sonnet, Susan! V2 L2 ..I just sit here letting that seep in a while .. I don't think you could find a better pic to go with the poem .. it's a bit hypnotizing itself .. you have captured a moment of profound beauty and wisdom says i .. it takes some living to stay at rest when our scattered pieces are revealed to us .. to note them and let them go .. brings wholeness ... the touch of sadness as such a contemplative moment fades ... yet the light of the new day outshines it all ... i really like this poem .. thoroughly enjoyed the experience .. as always, Susan, thanks for sharing!
E.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for diving into this little write and understanding it so thoroughly! Just a wonde.. read more
' Embraced, love cradles this bedeviled soul
in blissful credence; peacefully, I rest.
Illuminating broken pieces whole,
upon a wonderlust, star-laden, quest. '

This is as brilliant as those stars, Susan! You are such a craftsperson, following the required rules yet able to instil emotion and beauty into each and every line.

Elegant, colourful academic style yet somehow sounds natural, flowing.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

5 Months Ago

Aw thank you Em! Your reviews are always so sweet!! Thank you for reading and for leaving such a lov.. read more
emmajoy

5 Months Ago

I truly love the scent this poem emits, Susan - am inhaling weekly! Hope the week ahead goes calm.. read more
A talented write. Well done. Sonnets are difficult to master. Seems you have got a great grasp of them. Love your posted image to accompany your lines which were full of lovely imagery, as well as touching on the emotions. Good job done Susan.

Chris

Posted 6 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

6 Months Ago

Aw, thank you very much Chris! Such a sweet review :-) Thank you for reading.
Chris Shaw

6 Months Ago

My pleasure :)

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