Heaven Drenched

Heaven Drenched

A Poem by Susan 🌺

Heaven Drenched

How time begets such sweet romance

as tender notions dare impart.

Eyes bathed in moonlight, now entrance

quick steady beating of my heart.

Strong wanting arms draw ever close,

your body easing every ache.

Restraint now falls like dominoes,

this lover's dance of give 'n take.

Beneath our love and all around

bright starlit Heaven's blush and stare.

Breath quivers as soft lips surround ... 

let warm winds eavesdrop, I don't care.

Oh, wrap me in unbound desire,

till moments pause midst passing time.

Thus, rendering twin souls afire

and fantasies begin to chime.

Come lay me down beneath thy brawn

to share in wondrous ecstasy.

Shall wish away the breaking dawn,

when blissful waves peak endlessly.

’Tween rest subdues our appetites

'pon fallen embers, duly quenched...

What lingers, once again, ignites

two worlds, forever Heaven drenched.

A lover's story laced in gold,

sustaining breath therein remains.

Alone, You perfectly uphold

the beating life ~ within my veins

© 2022 Susan 🌺

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wow, such a rapture. This is an all consuming exploration into sensual and intimate love. Thank you

Posted 5 Months Ago

Brad Dehler

5 Months Ago

Absolutely. Delicious
Susan 🌺

5 Months Ago

… I do write a bit of love poetry ❤️. I’ll get over to your page again soon.
Brad Dehler

5 Months Ago

Excellent! Thank you Susan 😉
The romantisicm in this is very reminicent of Richard's romantic poems. (I have his book haha). Your style is perfect for classic poetry with the syllable counts embellished with the old style words. This is perfect poetry, Susan. The emotion is what the reader is left with. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago

Susan 🌺

6 Months Ago

Hey you! Thanks for reading and for this awesome review!!!
A romantic and sensual poem, with perfect rhythm and rhyme. Love is a wonderful thing, and it should indeed be celebrated!

Posted 7 Months Ago

Susan 🌺

6 Months Ago

Hi Robert! Thanks for reviewing! I need to head over to your page soon 😊
sheesh! what can one say .. such a gift you have, Susan! every word and line to be savored and built upon .. so very romantic .. such youthful ideals and dreams come true in such a union .. just beautiful .. makes me want to find the Fountain of Youth :))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Posted 7 Months Ago

Susan 🌺

7 Months Ago

Hi Gene, so you like it huh? 😊 Thank you for the compliment! Very nice of you. I’ve written a l.. read more
Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

yes! i like it hon! ;) it's a winner no matter the outcome ... inspires me
Hi Susan, well lovers can reignite even if they are not that young... That I know for sure..
not always, of course but with the right partner love can flourish..
I really loved you sensual poem dear Susan..
Lisa, now in Spain

Posted 7 Months Ago

Restrained erotica here, without vulgarity, which is as it should be. The lovers must be young, if the embers reignite that quickly.

Posted 7 Months Ago

Susan 🌺

7 Months Ago

:) ha! Wellll maybe? Thanks for reading and leaving me a positive review! Wishing you a lovely Sund.. read more

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Last Updated on June 13, 2022


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