The Way You Make Me Feel

I love everything you do,
Just watching you,
You don't know how much you mean to me,
But I hope your some what able to see-

How much I really care,
Because I know I don't always show it my dear,
But you make my heart flutter,
And know how to melt me like butter

As silly as it may sound,
I can't describe how much I love it when your around,
You mean everything to me,
It's almost like we were meant to be

And how I wish I could show this to you,
But I'd feel so silly,
with it being about you,
Cause your the silly one,
Who makes everything fun

The one who brightens my day,
And always know what to say,
The one I know I can always talk too,
When everything's just making me feel blue

I don't know where I would be,
If I didn't have you here to help me,
And I love that you tell me the same,
Without having any shame

We haven't said I love you,
Though sometimes I want too,
I'm glad there's been no rush for it,
Like so many people do

We were pretty good friends before,
But It makes me so happy,
That we've turned into so much more.

Reviews

[Saddam]

The one who brightens my day,
And always know what to say,
The one I know I can always talk too,
When everything's just making me feel blue

It is beautiful. Tingled my heart.

[Rocky Morgan]

Nice poem...sounds like a song:)

[John Ryan]

wonderfully sweet and well done piece

[JC]

very sweet and real, whoever this was for is very lucky.

[Yours Truly]

Thank you so much for such a kind review :)

[Wórdsmíth]

I like the lines: "You make my heart flutter,
And know how to melt me like butter."

Very passionate & fascinated lines. I love how you opened up a book of your heart into words ... and reflected that all through this beautiful imagery. Well pen`d!

[Sivgat Hasan]

It's a really heart-warming piece, well done!

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

This is a very heart warming piece. I always like reading these kinds of poems by women, just to get the idea what she's looking for and if the man is often doing the right thing. Sometimes, the simplest things can turn women on.

[Matching Socks]

This read like a love story. :)
Beautiful feelings expressed.

[Yours Truly]

Thank you for taking your time to review, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome.

[Justin]

that was really great, it is awesome how u told a story :)

[Yours Truly]

Thank you so much :)

[Justin]

your welcome, thanks for commenting on my story :) u are a great poet :)

[John Byrd]

This is beautiful and one of the best feelings to ever feel. I feel this way right now so it really touches me to see it written out. Good Job :).

[Yours Truly]

Thank you for the kind review :)