Flash

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  FLASH
On a fine beautiful Tuesday night
I saw him in the light
Tall, smart and a pearly smile
That attracted me from a thousand miles
When I had him in my life
It was an absolute delight
Hello, hello Teddy bear
Love me crystal clear
Sent me that smile, gave me that hug
Always made me bright, and never a fight
Something went wrong, a disaster came along
It made my loneliness rise upon
As my pride fell down, on and on
Losing him from my gripped fist
Like a dreadful mist
I cant stand it anymore feeling like this

 

s.Retana

 

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Reviews

[SuspectGray]

Sorry for your lost love...maybe you gripped too tight

[S Retana]

definitely... it was a huge mistake. :-|
Thank you for reading and your comment.

[Harsh Jain]

Very beautiful poem...love reading

[S Retana]

Thank you so much. :-)