Infinitely 2

Glad you are safe.

We could sit here all day
Watching ant trails and crumbs
Or skip stones in the pond.

And not utter a word.

Author's Note

no words. just relieved.

Reviews

[Saddam]

And not utter a word. .......................(..)

[Beccy]

Such a peaceful picture you have sketched here, and with just a few well chosen words. That is the mark of a poet.

Beccy.

[Aethereal]

Well done! Words have their limitations. Just being aware of being in itself surpasses any words, or logic. We learn nothing of a work of art by dissecting it into its component parts, as it must be experienced as a whole to be experienced at all. Ant hills, crumbs, and skipping stones on ponds are works of art in themselves. Our world is deeper than its parts.

[Rachelle]

Thank you, Aethereal!

[NeiL ArandA]

Love the simplicity it this piece . Just by simply knowing that someone that is special is safe and in good hands makes you appreciates and noticed even the most tiniest and overlooked things in life .

[Rachelle]

Thank you, sir! Hope you don't mind if I take time reviewing your work. It takes me some time to digest things. Dyslexic.

[NeiL ArandA]

Its totally optional .

[Shaquana Adams]

I like the simple tranquility that often goes unnoticed or ruined by the need for words. Nicely penned Rachelle :)
-QuanaWana

[Rachelle]

Thank you, Shaquana!

[Chris Micha]

To be able to share the silence of contentment with someone, is a universal utopia. That silence speaks more than words. Beautiful! :)

[Rachelle]

Thank you!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Prayer like and delicate, well done, good read.

[Rachelle]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

This wouldn't be a bad day. Sitting or tossing stones. Either one is a good day. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rachelle]

Thank you, sir!

[writ rajat]

VERY NICE WORDLESS POEM FANTASTIC

[Rachelle]

Thank you!

[Harris Malik]

We didn't plunder, we didn't ruin
we sat in silence and made existence our witness
when we fell in the moment ,we were togather

[Rachelle]

Lovely! Thank you!