Helena's Blue Rose Care ~ CINQUAIN form contest entry

Details The CINQUAIN is a poem or stanza of five lines. There are two kinds, the most popular and the one we use for this competition being as shown: Line 1 ~ One word (a NOUN) naming the subject of

Steed
Strong, fast
Gallops, trots, jumps
A gallant work reducer
Horse

Author's Note

A first attempt at this form of poetry. I have a LOT to learn.

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

this is a good write
love your noun choice and the words that follow
what a beautiful pic truly
thank you for sharing

[Helena]

Pretty good first attempt in fact its EXCELLENT! Cinquains are such fun to write and you have done just fine!!

Thanks for being the first submission!!

Helena :)


PS. Gorgeous horse, is that you riding?

[Norma M Sutton]

Thanks for the vote of confidence.

The big one is a gypsy vanner if my memory is correct. Not mine and not me lol. The small one with the blue and white mare is mine and yes that is me lol.

Norma

[Fabian G. Franklin]

A very good first attempt. I don't do "form"...I'm all over the place. lol LOVE the picture by the way...what a beautiful animal!

[Norma M Sutton]

Thanks Fabian. I like these because they make me think in a way I don't normally. The big black and white horse is a gypsy vanner if my memory is corrct. He/she is a beauty.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Well I never think normally so if I got something it would have to make me think normally and I don't think the world is ready for that. (laughing)