I Follow

I swim against currents fast

In Moonlight beams of broken glass

I follow.

Crawl out on molten land

Shifting wildly beneath wet hands

I follow

Run a race across red sand

Undulations below my feet

I follow

Shadows flee along the path

Ever chasing . . . yet

I follow

Race across the endless night

Not a thought of days bright light

I follow

Reviews

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
A beautiful write containing a visual that set my mind to musing before my fire. Trying to wrap my understanding around this unique tapestry a word jumped out at me that I did not know, that being the word undulate. This word I believe made the verse it was in explode with radiance of color. I really liked this poem!
Blessings, Laughing-Bear

undulate
verb |ˈənjəˌlāt; ˈəndyə-| [ intrans. ]
move with a smooth wavelike motion : her body undulated to the thumping rhythm of the music.
• [usu. adj. ] ( undulating) have a wavy form or outline : delightful views over undulating countryside.
adjective |-lit; -ˌlāt| |ˈʌndjʊlət| Botany & Zoology
(esp. of a leaf) having a wavy surface or edge.
ORIGIN mid 17th cent.: from late Latin undulatus, from Latin unda ‘a wave.’

[SHEEMA HUQ]

begs many questions about what an who is being followed by who, just riveting, great writing

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Facing the unknown and defying the odds. What an exhilarating poem full of wonderful positivity.

[Norma M Sutton]

Thank you Dale.