Wedding Day

Wedding Day

A Chapter by Norma M Sutton
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WOTD palpitate

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She enters the room
His heart joyously palpitates
And passing time stops


© 2010 Norma M Sutton


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Indeed it does-- like the contrasts with "palpitates" and "stops"

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. ahhh ... beautiful ... and am amazed you chose an indian bride ...


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the 'passing time' is a killer line - but not literally, on this occasion

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Beautiful poem. I can't imagine. One of my best friends is getting married at the end of this week. I know her heart is going to palpitate!

Posted 13 Years Ago


very lovely moment.
Then days dance away
as passing time palpitates
his heart stops the beat


Posted 13 Years Ago


Indian wedding garb is so pretty. I can see why his heart palpitated.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 8, 2010
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Norma M Sutton
Norma M Sutton

Bostic, NC



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Norma Moore Sutton has written and published two children's books: The First Lamb and Harry Goes To The Fair She has written and published the first book in the Haunting Memories Series: Matthe.. more..

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