When I Said I Do

When I Said I Do

A Poem by sweetvalorie

When I said "I do" I didn't understand what that really meant
I was carrying out the steps of my childhood dreams
The happily ever after, the happy house on the corner
Nobody ever said that it would be hard work
Nobody ever told me that we wouldn't see eye to eye from time to time
But I'd say "I do" all over again with you
I'd walk down the isle, I'd say my vows
Yes, I'd say "I do" all over again with you
When we gave ourselves to each other standing there at the alter
I didn't know that you had any flaws
I didn't know that someday you'd see my weaknesses too
But I've learned over time that we lift each other up when one has fallen down
Where one is weak the other one is strong
And we come together to make a beautiful picture of completeness
And I'd say "I do" all over again with you
I'd walk down the isle, I'd say my vows
Yes, I'd say "I do" all over again with you
We've come so far from where we began so much we have grown to understand
The needs of one another and the desires of our hearts
And I don't ever want to face a day without you by my side holding my hand
Holding my hand Just like the day when We said "I do"
And I'd do it all over again with you
I'd walk down the isle, I'd say my vows
Yes, I'd say "I do" all over again with you
And I'd say "I do" all over again with you
I'd walk down the isle, I'd say my vows
Yes, I'd say "I do" all over again with you

© 2014 sweetvalorie


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This is a true anology of marriage.I am strong where my wife is week and she is strong where I am week.I will try to locate the wedding vow poem I had written for our wedding I had got all emotional when I had read it to her at the alter every few years we will do it again to reaffirm the love we share.Very well written with the truest of love and adiration

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sweetvalorie

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your review and encouragement!



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This is a true anology of marriage.I am strong where my wife is week and she is strong where I am week.I will try to locate the wedding vow poem I had written for our wedding I had got all emotional when I had read it to her at the alter every few years we will do it again to reaffirm the love we share.Very well written with the truest of love and adiration

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sweetvalorie

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your review and encouragement!
This is a really interesting piece of work and a good one.
This is really good and the I can feel the emotion of it.
Really good poem,
Great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sweetvalorie

9 Years Ago

Thank you Lizardo Arias! Definitely full of emotions for me.

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Added on December 27, 2014
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sweetvalorie
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I write from my heart and soul. Some writings are made into songs and some are just merely written to be read. I leave my very being on the paper with my writings. more..

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