Reflection and ghost 2

Reflection and ghost 2

A Poem by Misterr Remeat
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Another take on a previous poem

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"Well you've been an exceptional host."
said my ghost as he made a toast
"And though I'm not one known to boast,
I've got a better gig on the coast."

"Don't leave me here!" my reflection wailed
"If you bail, my fun's curtailed!
I can't stay here and watch him flail
It will be too much like being in jail"

Apparently, I had no say
in the middle of the day, they walked away
and everything just turned to grey
under my breath I said "hooray"

and that's my brainfart for today

© 2018 Misterr Remeat


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I love this! Being an obsessive rhymer myself, I always enjoy some hardcore rhyming that does not quite push it over the limit becuz your writing also makes sense! (some rhymers get drunk on rhymes & forget to make sense) Really enjoy your uninhibited rhyming selections that carry your whimsical ideas forward in a storytelling way. I also admire when dialogue is used effectively, as you've done (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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barleygirl

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Addendum: GREAT ENDING SENTIMENTS too!



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I love this! Being an obsessive rhymer myself, I always enjoy some hardcore rhyming that does not quite push it over the limit becuz your writing also makes sense! (some rhymers get drunk on rhymes & forget to make sense) Really enjoy your uninhibited rhyming selections that carry your whimsical ideas forward in a storytelling way. I also admire when dialogue is used effectively, as you've done (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

5 Years Ago

Addendum: GREAT ENDING SENTIMENTS too!

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Added on October 4, 2018
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Tags: poetry, ghost, lyric, sad, happy, weird

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Misterr Remeat
Misterr Remeat

Nanaimo, cold and rainy then warm and sunny, Canada



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I live in Nanaimo B.C. under the "Witless"Protection Program. Nanaimo is on the East coast of Vancouver Island which is on the West Coast of Canada. I work too much but still find time to write and ta.. more..

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