Lifeless.

Lifeless.

A Poem by Sydney Evans
"

I don't know what too say..

"

Well, here I stood.

Cold and alone.

Hopeless and empty.

My emotions thrown.

 

All I have heard are lies.

All I have felt is tears.

I've gotten my heart shattered a thousand times.

But I keep on pushing through all my fears.

 

His words always drown me, a never ending trend.

Her words hit me, I feel worthless when it ends.

 

I am glad you could be here..

You have brought some light.

You have wiped away tears.

You stay with me through the night.

 

I got lucky but,

I'm scared one day you'll hurt me too..

 

Babe, stay with me ..

You have helped me through.

© 2011 Sydney Evans


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A very strong poem. Hard to stay positive when all we hear is negative. I like the positive ending. I believe rules must be set. Love is support to be kind and best days of a life. If someone is negative at the beginning. Run like hell. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i don't really know much, but this was a very moving piece of writing. i really enjoyed it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice rhythm and rhyme and flow of feelings , great write .... loved reading this .

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a very stron emotional poem. the style and the rhythm is easy to follow, and the emotional content is superb. you have made me experience the deep sorrow and comfort this poem portrays... it elegence is beyond comprehension and I can see your gonna be one of my favorites OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very poignant.."I've gotten my heart shattered a thousand times.
But I keep on pushing through all my fears"..talks a lot about positivity even in times of pain..keep it up!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I found this to be very honest and raw...your pain definitely came through. Very very nicely done

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very strong poem. Hard to stay positive when all we hear is negative. I like the positive ending. I believe rules must be set. Love is support to be kind and best days of a life. If someone is negative at the beginning. Run like hell. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you, I felt that way as I wrote.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like how even though the tone of the poem is sad all the way through, it gives hope of a new tomorrow at the end, even if it seems slight. I really enjoyed reading it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sydney Evans
Sydney Evans

Eaton, OH



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