Out of the Norm.

I usually write with ABAB... This poem is ABCB. <3

I've been feeling something special.

Something beautiful you see.

Our lives, my dear, they have hope.

It can't carry any misery.

We need to live, live to the fullest extent. 

We can't just let go.

Our dreams can't take place,

When all of our lives we're moving slow.

We have to push forward.

We can't stay in the past.

Forward is the only way,

To have our dreams begin and last.

So let's push ourselves.

Let's be the best individual we can be.

We have to give it our all.

In the end it'll set you free.

Reviews

I have read two of your poems now and the best thing is they are both following a distinct rhyme scheme and then again the rhymes are not forced and does not compromise the meaning or the feeling of the poem . I am obsessed with rhyming and Ipersonally try to follow this in my write , so , loved this one too , may glory be yours .

[Samantha (:]

Very inspirational and catchy little poem. Well written, and I love the message. Very optimistic view point that we all should observe! (:

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I like this, it's inspirational yet at the same time it's merely what it is and nothing more. you didnt have to explain the flower in the picture, but since it's there, it's perfect. I think it would be safe to say that this made us all smile :)

This is so true. It's a nice happy poem and makes me feel like getting up and trying something I've never done before.

[Dilan Gray]

I love this poem! You are such a good writer, I love your work so far! This is such an awesome poem!

[E.M.Oglesbee]

this poem is a ray of sunshine through the cloud of depressing poems that are everywhere on this site. I am not saying that i do not enjoy depressing poetry, but i need to read something happy every once in awhile and this was just that. i thank you for writing it :)

[GamingGal]

Pros: Mmm, it's nice to read some happy poetry for a change! Lately mine has been reflecting my situations, and when I go to review random poetry, it always ends up being sad stuff. But, I like this! The flow is nice, and your word choice fits quite well. I like the optimism in this piece. It's like a ray of sunlight.

Cons: None, really.

Overall: I really do like this poem. We all need to be optimistic for a change.

[Somer]

Very cute! It flowed nicely and it has lots f meaning! Live life to its fullest, that's so true :) Great job on this! :D

[Arabdha]

very peppy !!