Fading

Fading, fading, fading…
It seems you’re slowly
Fading, fading, fading
Like the disappearing sunset

But no!
Don’t leave me here by myself now!
No!! Don’t abandon me to stay
In this horrid, cursed place

Stay with me,
Now and always
It’s gonna be alright
But yet you still seem to be fading
Fading, fading…

Why?!
Why now?
Why you?
Why me?

Answer that question, now
Exactly why is this happening?
Am I being tortured like this
Do you have to fade away?

Stay here!
You can’t leave now!
Now, when I need to most
Don’t you dare go fading
Fading, fading…

Fading, fading, fading…
Fading, fading, fading..
Gone.

Author's Note

Just in a poetry mood. Tell me what you think!
Sylvia.

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

ok... what i think, let me tell you :)
I think, this write or poem's very nice and a great one, totally came from your deep eyes and poured into your words and words jotted from your heart. your imaginary's too awesome i'd say. I don's think that there's any errors here in this piece. you tittle's nice and unique i think "FADING". Yur capturing power's quite high and i know you've a great talent as well.

Here in this poem, i liked your questioning's too in this phrase.
Why?!
Why now?
Why you?
Why me?

what a great one, it shows that you're not even a poetess, you're a writer too. Only A true write knows about those things. Beautiful write.
I'd love to read your some more writes too.

[Wall of Words]

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked the poem... I actually focus mostly on writing, these poems were just ideas, and I ran with them XD
Thanks so much for taking the time to review my work!
Sylvia.

[Inspiring Writer]

Your welcome... lol, it's ok. Well, yeah, i've seen that you've written mostly books and story's. Don't worry, i'll read them all too very soon but let me grab my some time first.. lol
and even i chosen your this write because i've time shortage, i got today my time to read and write. so.................. ! XD hope you can understand.
yeah, you're a great writer too. i've seen that. keep going on with your talent... wwrite whatever you want to write whether it's poem, books, sceenplays, blogs, story's and so on. I've seen you've a talent and i love reading those first who've got some unique talent as you got :)

I'll read your some more stuffs very soon!
Take care! :)

[Wall of Words]

Thanks and you too. :)

[pikachulover]

A flowing poem... indeed! Like the disappearing sunset..... it was an imaginable poem. Good job WW! It had an animation and I liked the the way of writing and surely the idea. Keep it up and thanks for sharing! :)

[Wall of Words]

Thank you very much for reviewing! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

[Savannah Hudgens]

This poem reminds me so immensely of the friends that come and go through the years, the lovers that leave at night, the deceivers who never really leave us at all. Beautiful.

[Wall of Words]

Thank you Savannah. :)
Sylvia.

[Rahul]

Nicely penned, i have seen life's fade by your words. Great job.

[Lydia Shutter]

The questions we ask ourselves when events and circumstances change our lives forever...."why now, why you, why me?" Unfortunately there are no easy answers. Stunning emotional intensity in this one. I liked it. Lydi**

[Wall of Words]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[Mathew Nicolson]

Nice, you've captured the tone of despair well, and it raises many questions - is this a friendship ending, or a death? Or maybe even imagination, creativity, or hope? I'd be interested in hearing this read out, to see how the reader would emphasise the word 'fading' 8 successive times without it sounding repetitive. But it seems to work fine in word format.

[Wall of Words]

I got the repetition idea from Edgar Allen Poe's poem "the Bells."
As for what's ending... I imagined it as a death of a close friend, and that's how I wrote it, but it's just as able to be interpreted in other ways. :)
Thanks for reading!
Sylvia.

[Sami Khalil]

You ( your great other )are fading but the poem is etched in our memories. Well done...:)

[Wall of Words]

Thanks Sami! I appreciate the time you spent to read the poem, as well as your kind comment!
Sylvia.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)