The Urgency of Cellophane

The Urgency of Cellophane

A Poem by synecdiotic

the urgency of cellophane
shrouds the overpass pink,
the candy wrapper camera lens.
at the tool booth, your voice--soundtrack
to the crossing of canals--
convinces me the pho is best
on the east side of the city.

somewhere on the map,
we’re old lovers in a truck bed.
but for the sake of our bodies,
the palms of our hands
have maps with stringy coordinates.
we orient ourselves:
there’s a marsh fire out the window
but the wharf still hums industrial.

© 2011 synecdiotic


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wow... that was magnificent!

love your writing style, really enjoyed this...

"somewhere on the map,
we’re old lovers in a truck bed.
but for the sake of our bodies,
the palms of our hands
have maps with stringy coordinates.
we orient ourselves:
there’s a marsh fire out the window
but the wharf still hums industrial."

Ooooooohh... very, very, nice.
Antonio


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synecdiotic
synecdiotic

New Orleans, LA



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I'm a college student looking to share my poetry, fiction, and non-fiction to the public, and hoping for feedback! You can find my blog at http://synecdiotic.wordpress.com. Please follow me :) more..

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