glitched ou....g..g...gli...glitched out brain

glitched ou....g..g...gli...glitched out brain

A Poem by siri
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wow this crazy ahhhh crazy AHHHH sigh of relief.....scratch scratch rewind

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water bubbles blasted and spurted
particles of green and yellow and blue
prime to create and make us believe what we think is true
blind by obliderations and sacraficed blood build up
essential life salts to burn out our eyes with others souls
destroy our picture of "perfect" reality to realease the truth
 
glitched out brains responding once but thinking twice then backtracking to repeat the exact same g g g g glitched out idea
to confuse our confused idea on what confusion really means
and now our eyes are oppen
seeing horror in our to do list
making SCREAMS become a normal society trait

 

© 2009 siri


Author's Note

siri
fucked my choose blast forward stop!

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i love what your trying to do here cause that happens to me. so much is going through my mind i just write it all down into one condensed piece of several ideas. i throughly enjoy your first stanza. all sorts and mixed up as it may be it works

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow thats an awesome poem!!!!!

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Wow, this was such a fun time to read. XD I love it. It's so random, and yet almost makes sense somehow? (: I really loved the line "to confuse our confused idea on what confusion really means" Great job!

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Random, yes, yes indeed...wel written....

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Rocher


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Posted 15 Years Ago


wow... damn kid i love your twisted brain waves.
this is rad.

yes, i did just say rad. and i meant it.
oh i miss you, Siri, write to me and tell me things, those things of yours that brighten the moments i spend reading them!
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very very deep i love it

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