HEY there!

HEY there!

A Poem by siri

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HEY there

I keep knocking on my head

Wondering where I have gone



HEY there


Wake up boy

Please stop pretending

To be





I’ve lost leverage

My mind reaches hights

Of new pressure


Twitches of PURE pleasure


Guess what


I decided

to get lost in my mind…tonight?

for the last time…HA HA yeah right

stop paying attention

to the senses  

that keep me stuck in reality


I break down

Tears melt personality

Pain reminds me of fear

I guess I cant express

My immortality


I use pillows

To drown out 


And what not

Tell myself

The drugs


Inject poison


Living proof


Mind raped

And lost alone


The only thing

That keeps me sane

Is pain

Pain reminds me of fear


Reminds me im living

In an endless dream


Where screams come out with out giving

And death is only the beginning


© 2012 siri

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I'm smiling. For some weird reason it's not the most appropriate thing do be doing after reading this poem (song?) of yours. I can see the spiritual side to this (in fact, this is probably one of the most spiritual poems I've read on here, if that's how I wanna read it... filter your words), and I can see the substances ( reality,whatever that is.. different for everyone, reason... the worst drugs people are addicted to in this world, the scariest ones to be tripping on too) speaking as well, or a very restless mind.

I like how chirpy you made it in a way (the tempo, rhythm... chirpy or aggressive, don't really know, I'm so indecisive), and how "dark" (fyi.. .hate the word dark, how about just humane) it is at the same time... humanely raw, and how out of place that emotion is after reading into the actual words, the whole work is like a happy tear, if that makes any sense.. or an unhappy smile. How about that.

I'll stop taking your time now.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Nice write! I like the way it charges through all the way to the end. Dramatic and slightly scary.

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is quite the powerful read here.
I like this, very well written, so full of emotion.

Posted 10 Years Ago

"I decided
to get lost in my mind…tonight?
for the last time…HA HA yeah right..."

knowing what you were talking about before reading this helped paint a clearer picture for me...

just want to add that the poem itself is written well.. and i really felt your words

Posted 10 Years Ago

very interesting piece my first impression was that this poem was lighthearted and enjoyably funny. as i read on as you the writer must know your poem got much darker and complex. i enjoyed the play with CaPs :) alright so yea...great write

Posted 10 Years Ago

i like this it's cool i guess!!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

In the first couple of lines, my impulse was to laugh. but when i got farther, i saw that it was about something much more serious and deep. a statement about insanity. It was cool. I liked it.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Oh boy. You just get better and better, huh?
I can relate 100% to this.
Be expecting more reviews from me in your future.
Your just too damned good at what you do for me to stop reading now.

Posted 10 Years Ago

That's kind of rough. In my own opinion, of who cares what I think but I care what I think so I'm going to tell you; this whole piece is just one big code for someone tormented and I didn't really get the poem. I did however, definitely sense some way dark undertones.That was very expressive and creative in ways, thanks for the read.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Wow! I have honestly never read such a powerful and dark piece of poetry before! The way you put the whole thing together was just AMAZING! You had me hooked from the very start, something I have come to expect from all of your writings. This was such a fantastic write! You did an EXCELLENT job!!! I've come to really enjoy reading your stuff.

Posted 10 Years Ago

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome love the rhyming...and how u put the whole thing 2gether...good one...this has 2 do with drug usage rite,,,if yea then awesome wake up call 2 urself....hahahaha Wake up...no one can reallly stop u but urself...good one

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on May 13, 2008
Last Updated on January 25, 2012



Albuquerque, NM

boom boom boom la la la la la hey you! yeah you! Im pointing at you now... ... i guess some part of me is always gonna be pointing at you...or the other person thats reading this...until of cours.. more..

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