Sassy Frassy

girls can be wicked

girls; They wiggle and jive

just to feel alive.

with nails turned into claws

the point out the other gal's flaws.

with hairs in bobs,weaves, or extensions

they try to get the guys attentions.

Daddy complex gone wrong

they give it up at prom.

nine months later

living in a trailer

Queen of the mobile park

she is still a mean snark

snot noised baby on her hip.

at least she doent have to strip and unzip

she is still on a pleasure trip.

some girls never learn.

that in good turn,

that wiggle and jive,

that feeling of being alive,

sex drive,

they wont survive,

the swan dive.

Author's Note

not the best thing, I know. Just writing out or boredom.

Reviews

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Uniquely written and full of truths. I really enjoyed reading this. Creative piece, well done!

[SuicidePact.]

I am your biggest fan.

[Tabitha t]

Hahaha thanks girl!

[Joey Johnson]

You said it all when you said Daddy complex. Nice job.

[Marie]

Some girls never learn...and they turn into women who don't learn either...

[gombeggar]

another fine poem but again remove the commas and periods...and workon that first line...i would do this: 'Girls; they wiggle an jive' or 'Girls: they wiggle and jive' ...punctuation can say a lot so u wanna be careful not to throw it around cuz it can change the meaning of yer expression

[.]

i blame all those cinderella kinda stories onwhich we suckle our young... riding off into the sunset, some worthwhile prince, and all of that...

poor pets

thanks for sharing

[Tabitha t]

thanks for reviewing!

[Baby Ricochet]

I love it when girls wiggle and Jive. It drives me out of my mind but I use condoms so there's no little Baby Ricochet's running around the trailer park.

[Tabitha t]

hahaha so your the king of the park? wear a crown of tin or copper?

[Craig2591]

Made me smile. I agree it's not your best, but it's not bad either.

[Silhouette]

Really powerful and full of wisdom, I agree, some girls never learn. Great job, as usual :)

[Nirego]

I think you've been a little harsh on yourself - it might not be the best, but I think you could be on to something.

Perhaps you could consider it a work in progress? The sentiment is certainly a true one and I think many people would relate to it.

Also serves as a pretty good lesson to be careful as you have your fun!