A Love Song

A Love Song

A Poem by Tai Chi Italy Take Two
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I wrote this as a comment on one of Chloe's poem some time back. She very kindly sent it to me recently when I was feeling rather down. Thank you Chloe.

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I will play you a song
a song that will make you strong.

I will play you a song
a song that will make you feel you belong.

I will play you a song
a song of far off days, when life was beautiful

I will play you a song
that will lift you through your darkest haze

I will play you a song
that will bring comfort and warmth

a song full of joyous memory
of all you have achieved

in comfort and love
you freely give and receive.

I will play you a song
that will make you strong.

I love you too
and my love WILL

see you through

© 2011 Tai Chi Italy Take Two


Author's Note

Tai Chi Italy Take Two
I don't often write songs, so I am not sure of the format, but this one just came to me, thanks again to Chloe. Any advice, crit away.

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This is so lovely and sweet. I wish I had a song that I could use for every time I was feeling down. Maybe I will just read this poem instead :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lulling and inviting, the spirit feels renewed after reading such a caring sentiment, the expression holds the reader's winter days in the warmth of
endearing arms, soft and sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Not bad at all...;) I'd advise it stay as is...cheerful, meaningful, complete.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it Tai and I love you.
I think it is written perfectly. You wrote this spur of the moment and it
is wonderful.

And of course, you are welcome:)

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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