Advancing Pt.1

Futura Stream

Advancing Pt.1

Nonchalantly she surrendered in the lapse of time.

A sign of relief as we encountered an old friend.

Shared myths and obscure revelations.

We crossed the gate and capped the vacuum of our old times.

Rainbow shades,

It was all new then and what we had wished for.

Simple words,

No numbers,

Jovial thoughts...

Reviews

[A. Amos]

This is one interesting write and I truly enjoyed, Thank you for sharing

[Friday]

Very good. Flows lightly although brief but that is no drawback really. Most enjoyable!

[Chaos_Collector]

I hope to see a part two to this poem some time soon. Good work so far

Chaos_Collector