Resolve

head in hands
on the floor
clutch at strands
of before

cold hard ground
breathe it in
make no sound
let it win

strength inside
never quit
if you can't fight
smother it

push it down
never think
mustn't drown
will not sink

swallow keys
no retreat
off your knees
on your feet

Reviews

[Samith Pich]

i found this poem deceptive, the words are simple yet hold an emotive poer larger than themselves - i think it's because we're not quite sure what the protagonist needs resolve for - for anger? for patience? for courage etc.

the small stanzas read like an instruction manual yet if said over and over have the weight of sutras.

the end is excellent

[Adela Muresan]

A great poem in the honor of the popular saying ,, Never give up,,.

Good write.

A.M.

[BLFK]

First of all, I've never talked to anyone in London, so hello! I know that's weird to say, but it's true. Thank you for reviewing my work. . .
This is a powerful piece, Jon. You've captured the emotions that can be felt in a situation like this, quite perfectly. I especially liked the ending. That was very powerful. I really enjoyed this. Very good for someone who says he doesn't write that much. I love how you made everything flow together perfectly. Just perfectly. I can't wait to read more of your work.

BLFK

[L.G. Knight]

Very simple and yet powerful enough to make me want to stand up and fight.... Very well done!

~Frances~