I Can't Stand Homophobic People.

Not necessarily about Homophobia or homosexuality. Think "deep."

 Hi.

You challenge me enough to be

Smart,

But you're so ignorant, to me.

 

All that is so wrong, you love, I hate.

You hate change when change

Is what

We desperately need.

 

Stop.

You're so fast to call someone

Racist.

But you told me never to bring home

 

A white guy,

Maybe

I don't

Even like guys,

All that is

So wrong,

You love.

I hate..

 

Just stop,

Stop your lies,

I'm not listening.

You changed

The channel, I

Was watching Ellen.

Just stop.

 

I'd

Ask for a new one,

But I'm not rude.

I'd

Ask for re-do,

But it would fail,

As

Well.

 

Hide

In the edges of your mind.

Stand

On your platform of duct

Tape your ears close,

I say

What's said

Everyday.

Get in the ground,

I'll wait.

Count down

The days.

 

Stop freezing our ice,

We need the water.

Stop selling our supplies,

We need them.

 

Old

Times were much harder

Than now.

You Are

Needing a change in

Scenery.

 

New, New, New,

Now.

 

Hi.

Reviews

[Ron Hogan]

I kind of like the dysfunctional style you have going, but I'm having a hard time following exactly what you're trying to say. Going by your title, the poem seems to hinge around the lines, "Maybe / I don't / Even like guys," but I don't see how it really ties in with everything. Most of it I can see tying in, in some manner or another, but the last two stanzas really have me lost. There's potential here, but it needs more work to really bring it out.

[Jane Doe]

i hate homo haters all of them are asses i can't belive this worldbthese days
DISCRIMNATION NEEDS TO STOP TODAY!!! it is not fair they love who has there heart
I know 2 couples that are homophobic
ryan+river
aunty josh+uncle paul
I SWEAR IF U JUDGE A BOOK BY IT'S COVER YOU WILL FIND URSELF IN HELL I SWEAR CUZ JUDGE= DISCRIMNATION = THE WORLD TODAY!

luv ya luv homophobics
hate homophobic haters D.A J.A
luv abbie:)

[GoodIntentiionz]

The style you used in this poem was, to me, very unique, it was so different it was kind of cool and interesting :D

But I don't understand where it's going at all, I just saw you don't "even like guys" (and so homosexual), but what does that have to do with you hating homophobics?

I don't know, I'm just looking at it from the other side. I look at both sides of the problem before I answer, I'm hoping that's a good thing?

Anyways, good job.

[Jessi]

I would like it more if it weren't so chopped.
But I hate homophobes too

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

I like the akward way that you set up this poem cause with me, its usually a complete thought on a line. i love how you broke that. its a nice concept and i enjoyed it!!!!!!!!

[John A Common]

I dig your style its differant and thats cool. I'm not onehundred percent on what you are talking about but that makes it kind of abstract. Cool poem.