Scorpion Sky

Scorpion Sky

A Poem by Tamme
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Tonight's moon inspired me. (5/19/08)

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Being chased by this blaze in my eye

I give in to the scorpion sky.

You see, this moon is stunning

As it plans something cunning.



Set the ground with the perfect light

So that Suffering's bridges ignite.

Scorch the night and rival the sun,

Accepting what was, shall now be undone.

As I pull  control to my hands

It is time I burn your plans.



Toss away the wishes and desires

Rid my life of fools and liars.

Visions clear--my heart opens my mind

Seeing -- it is what it is--leave it behind.

 

 

© 2011 Tamme


Author's Note

Tamme
I gave myself chills.

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I can see why you got chills, it flowed perfectly! very nice write the tempo of it was great and I've always been one to enjoy the rhyming scheme!

Posted 9 Years Ago


You see, this moon is stunning
As it plans something cunning.

These lines are particularly meaningful to me and I relate a whole new chapter to it! Thanks for sharing the expression!


Posted 9 Years Ago


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Ari
Again, great work. The first two lines of this are really spectacular.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Tossing away the wishes and desires
And ridding my life of fools and liars.
Visions clear my heart with an open mind
Seeing -- it is what it is and leave it behind.

I am half asleep, but this verse caught my attention! Forceful enough to embed in my thoughts. Excellent work!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


excellent piece! I shall add it to my fav's, for I...am..a scorpion!
Sandra

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Posted 12 Years Ago


I was driving into work this morning and the moon was settling into it hiding spot as I watched it noticing it was a blood moon. Red as fire and completely full. I know the importance of having the influence of such things sweep over you. So i have a deep appreciate for your words here as I can feel them in a way others may miss but I am glad to have been able to give them a read and feel them to the core of myself.


Great Job!!!!!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


One of your best I think. Putting a stinging strike into a situation and burning suffering's bridges, a very cool concept. I too saw the full moon as the storm pulled away last night...but I wrote nothing.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


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