Suicide

Suicide

A Poem by RTB

Clenching the divine in the palm of my hand,

Release is my options no room to expand,

 

Digging in deep for this vigorous trial,

Only to come back with a vicious denial,

 

Glistening once but now ominous my eyes,

Plainly just darkness no splits or divides,

 

My emotion now simple to others it spreads,

Gave one last look in the mirror and blew off my head..

 

© 2010 RTB


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wow, this was so good and so intense. you did an outstanding job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow....great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Intense in feeling, so powerful; good word selection and a bit subtle and shaded, even with the intensity. Nice work!
Suicide is not a wise choice, Karma will make you pay, she'll give you a "do over" on the life you cut short, she's mean that way.

Posted 8 Years Ago


very stronge i can feel the emotion i really really like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


kirk curbain...?hmm
suicidal thougths....strong lines............good write

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very strong, i can feel the emotion. Good write. Cleverly written

Posted 8 Years Ago


wooh!!! this is a poem that could really make its readers shiver to the bone...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow...this one made me shiver...
Peace
Robin

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great write, If my lovely friend Matthew loved it, lol, i'm sure to too. :) We've got common taste.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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