Shattered

Shattered

A Poem by RTB
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Broken

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Breathless, the visions, pulsing, refined,

Choking and gasping. I'm dying.. rewind,

 

Emotions were pulling, our words so unkind,

Tugging but fading, your no longer mine,

 

Seeing. Believing.. no longer combined,,

You stole my damn heart and left me behind....

 

© 2011 RTB


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Very touching, although quite short a powerful message has been written and full of emotions.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice short poem I like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


"You stole my damn heart and left me behind...."
heh, that tends to happen...

Posted 8 Years Ago


I can identify with the heartbreak expressed here. The images are so vivid in my mind. Nicely done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I hear ya.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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like this too- love the rhythm.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Powerful. I felt each of those words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A very beautiful and intense piece. Your choice of wording increases the power and imagery of your poem. Its subtle yet thought provoking and deeply beautiful. Nice writing that captivates and makes you think and feel.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Brilliant piece
your words are like lyrics to country western song
this poem would make a beautiful song
Flow is excellent and your message clear

Kudos

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Cocoa, FL



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