Priceless Evening

Priceless Evening

A Poem by Tarry Franck

On a cold winter night
The flames that are near
Burn warm by my side,
The embers that glow
Along with the amber moon
And the gentle breeze
That moves through my hair
Makes for a perfect evening
Amid all the despair,
The autumn feel
Stirs my soul
And surfacing memories
Of new and old,
Recapturing them all
A priceless feeling
Which leaves me standing tall
And on the ground kneeling.

© 2012 Tarry Franck


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Lovely...good write....

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

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Very nice, Tarry. I thought the "Burn warm" was redundant (because it is) but the past and rhythem of the writing is very good. I enjoyed this read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
love this write! wonderful imagery and some clever metaphor, surrounded with the duality of emotion. superb!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
A beautiful poem. Description took the reader to a good place. Thank you for the excellent poem.
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Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
I love this one nicely done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Tarry Franck
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