The Woman I Was Before

From the ground

I need to climb

Reach for the stars

And await the moon to rise,

Hang upon her sensual glow

To empower me

For I've fallen too low,

Need to feel the graces

She has to offer

And bask in her oasis,

Confident I need to remain

And down below

It was not there to gain,

I feel a loss

That she can restore

Need to tune in to 

The woman I was before,

The immense hues

That she shines upon me

I can't help but dance within

And recapture the freedom, the happiness

That has allowed me

To overcome these blues.

Reviews

[Hamza]

coming out of a particular situation isn't that easy.. it takes time to heal and get back to what you are ..
but focus is the key and this poem depicts exactly how to do it ...
very impressive and lively ...
and particularly the last lines ooze life and determination ..
"I can't help but dance within
And recapture the freedom, the happiness
That has allowed me
To overcome these blues" ..
excellent !!

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks for the encouraging and kind words my dear friend :)

[Ethale Captor]

A beautiful write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Ethale Captor]

You are welcome.

[TPK Stories]

It's nice when we can remember where we came from so we can enjoy the person we are now...well written...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear

[quinfinn]

this is perfectly worded. a very solid and entertaining poem, to be sure. i applaud your personal honesty!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for a wonderful review!!!

[Lover Of Words]

You used the titile i gave you....I love this

[Tarry Franck]

Yes, and I thank you - had to change that one line for it to fit in but it worked. I appreciate it, my lovely niece.

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome glad i could help

[DrD]

the graces / oasis rhyme was original and excellent. The theme is solid and clearly demonstrated. An poem that is an enjoyment to read.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[luviva]

trully good n though provoking..real great write

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Cryingkate]

Hello Tarry,
I guess you are not blue now, but full of light!

Hang upon her sensual glow
To empower me
For I've fallen too low,

Nice imagery and expression of beautiful sentiment

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you