I Want To Hold You

The waves of the ocean

Crash against the shore

That's how my heart feels

On this day for sure,

It's been a month

Since my Dad has passed

Yet it feels like yesterday

Still feeling such sadness,

My family still mourning

The loss of him

I would give anything

To have him here with us again,

Will the grieving ever stop

This truly deeply

Deeply hurts a lot,

I don't mean to sound selfish

I know he was suffering real bad

But I can't help it

I just want to hold you Dad.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. My dad passed on to a better place in 1996. Every Friday for 20 years. I called him. Today I wish to call him still. Some pain is good. Can't forget the good people in our life. I'm sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

I'm sorry for your loss too.

[Sid]

I'm sorry for your and I guess the pain of losing someone you love never goes away but you have to hold on to their memories. This is touching poem and very well conveyed...great write!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[MOON]

Condolences to you and your family. Beautiful touching write. Your father lives in your heart forever, it's the physical Presence that loss that is so difficult to endure. Take care!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for the kindness

[TPK Stories]

Even though we know they are in a better place, that doesn't stop us from missing those that have departed this world...excellently written...

[Tarry Franck]

So true and thank you for the kind words.

[quinfinn]

my Dad passed in 2006. the pain still endures, but the days get easier after a year or so. i love this heartfelt tribute to your love for your Dad. well done!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for the kind words!!!

[C.C. Marx]

This is a magnificent tribute! I'm sorry for your loss, but know he is watching over you as you live your life and grow old :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for you kindness

[C.C. Marx]

Your very welcome thank you for sharing :)

[Hamza]

honestly the most touching poem i've ever read ..
may the departed soul rest in peace and may God give you strength to bear the loss...
i was really moved ... so sentimental ... Blessings ..

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much for such kindness :)

[Hamza]

:)

[Lover Of Words]

I miss him!!!!!!! Great write

[Tarry Franck]

I know you do too! {{{HUGS}}}

[DrD]

An emotional tribute poem speaking of grief and loss. Well structured and poignant. A very nice job.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[luviva]

ohhh i felt 4 u.. en trust mi i knw the feeling n u r not being selfish wishing 4 him 2 saty eventhough he was suffering.. he would only be proud ov u if helived to c this poem/... truly great!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Awe that's very kind of you to say.