Damsel In Distress

She grew her wings

In the desert

Brittle they became

And within that

Grew such shame,

Her frail body walked

No help in sight

For minutes, hours, days

But she had to keep her strength

Her might,

On bended knee

We all gathered and prayed

And this vibrant body

Gained a gust of wind

And we find her wings are strong

And flying again,

She fluttered by to give thanks to

Each and every one of us

But all we did is like any others would

Give strength to a guardian angel in distress.

Reviews

[Margarette]

I view this poem as that of a person who nearly lost all hope due to a series of unfortunate events in his/her life. It is true that there are people out there who are willing to give a helping hand to someone in need and it's never too late. I just wish that people would come helping at the right moment not when it becomes too late but really, we should face it, almost all of us only help when we are pressured to do so. But this is just my perspective. It's still more acceptable to just help with an initiative to begin with and no intention of receiving something in return. Just like in your poem, we might never know that someday, when we helped someone, that "someone" might turn out to be a guardian angel. Thanks for sharing!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much for the positive review - it is greatly appreciated. Glad you picked up on the concept.

[Renée]

Beautiful work as always Tarry... that is what we are here for lifting each other up..giving hope...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Leigh]

I like the way she made it on her own having no help from others, this woman is a real self starter, beautiful images of an angel in the desert you have created for me, thanks Leigh.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Sir Joseph]

This is a very deep poem. Bravo!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sir - glad you enjoyed it!!!!

[icelandicblue]

I like the building of strength in this poem. We are all fragile and yet we are strong and resilient. I like the use of the angel and wings in this poem. It's a lovely write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much

[Ohhhwillow]

The concept of faith, hope and guidance stands out to me here.. My mum was always a spiritual believer, in that we have angels watching over us, guiding us when needed. This reminds me of that. When we're lost in a sand storm often we need to keep hoping and stay strong, for the light is not too far off. This brings hope to those who read it, spreading their wings and flying on with their own songs to sing. Well done

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for the wonderful review :))))))))

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Angel fly, Angel crush and even burn but before you experience such downfall, your guardian angel will take it all. I believe in angels. Great brilliant write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and powerful poem. I believe Angels need help also. Even if it is only to be remembered. I like the journey you took me on and the ending. We must appreciate and care for the angels in a life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks again Coyote - it's greatly appreciated my friend :)

[luviva]

a great write, nice read i enjoyed here.....

[Tarry Franck]

Glad you enjoyed it :)

[Frieda P]

An ethereal & uplifting read Tarry, this one spoke to me, I think you know why, thanks so much for sharing this.

[Tarry Franck]

Yes, I do know why and I'm glad you found it uplifting. :)