Moving On

Moving On

A Poem by Tarry Franck



I once had a lover
That embraced me 
Beneath warm covers,
Where he resides
I no longer know
What I do know is he's no longer by my side,
He's no longer my lover
So I assume
He's with another,
My nights are lonely but I stay strong
No rest for the weary
Time to move on.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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Great motivation and keep going on...because one day he'll know the worth of youse if he was wrong.
nice piece of write, you jotted what your heart got and what life gave you with pain.but don;t you forget...everything happens for a reason..so, you're going right.don't stop, life' has no limit...break youse limits and get the way to live.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Thank you Rahul



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Great motivation and keep going on...because one day he'll know the worth of youse if he was wrong.
nice piece of write, you jotted what your heart got and what life gave you with pain.but don;t you forget...everything happens for a reason..so, you're going right.don't stop, life' has no limit...break youse limits and get the way to live.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Thank you Rahul
A very nice poem. Sometime faces appear. I would love to have a cup of coffee and a conversation with a old lover. Would be interesting to see where they landed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote
simple, clean... well put.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Thank you
Definitely a relatable concept...the loss of a lover and the musings of what the lover is doing now, without you. I also like the feeling of this one, it read well, save for a few formatting issues. I think that you may do well to put a space between the lines "I no longer know" and "What I do know is he's no longer by my side,"--this area gave me a little trouble in terms of flow. Other than that, well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Thank you
Very good I like the emotions and I like the rhyming pattern you have going here. It's so hard to lose someone that you love.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Thank you
Love this. If only I had that kind of mind set.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Thank you
May you gain the strength you need to move on. . .excellent write! :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear
hard to forget those old lovers, especially those who left a real and lasting impression on both our hearts and our psyches, but, as you so eloquently state, sometimes you just gotta move on......NEXT!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Absolutely
Stay strong my dear this is one for the books for sure i love the emotion you put in it i have seen you put alot into your words lately and this one just pops out on the page... Seeing this on a regular basis from you now your writes get more amazing as i see each one.... And though i am related i am a huge fan of this one and i am glad to see you writing again not just good pieces but AMAZING pieces I Love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Lover Of Words

7 Years Ago

Your very welcome
This vibrates on the page Tarry...it's never easy is it? Good to see you again my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Thanks Frieda
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Lovin' the new pic, my pleasure!
Tarry Franck

7 Years Ago

Thank you

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