My Dark Lord

My Dark Lord

I seek thee

Spread your dark wings

To comfort me

You will find me on bended knee,

With tears in hand

I await the sound of the wings of thunder

To raise me

From the spell I am under,

As I hear your wings beating

I rise

It's you My Dark Lord

No longer do I have to feel the need to hide,

I grasp your wing and climb upon

Where you take me

I know there will be dusk and dawn,

We will revel in each others embraces

 My Dark Lord, I thank thee

For you are my saving grace.

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I like the dark imagery in this one; reminds me a little of an "ode" that one would find in a vampire story. There is a sense of intoxication in the lines...of giving over to something that you realize is dark, but still a "saving grace" of sorts. Nice flow as well. I would just change the "u" to a "you" in the 15th line.

[Tarry Franck]

Oh thank you. Hate when I do that...so used to texting. Thanks for catching that.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

No problem...it happens :)

[Lydia Shutter]

An ode to darkness.....solemn and powerful. There is a thin line between pleasure and pain and I think you have expressed that here. Good one. Lydi**

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Lydi**

[Leigh]

An accurate portrayal of a disciple of the Dark Lord, this reads like a prayer.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Leighgreen

[Rahul]

That's really a great piece that you just dropped by. I liked this one because you left here some new things about Dark lord, i meant for good things. I liked this and really enjoyed this reading much. This's really a great and a beautiful poem. Keep writing :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem and prayer. We must believe in something. Keep us strong and on the right path. Thank you for sharing the beautiful words of love for God. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[OBWhiteHawk]

Nicely done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Graveyardfuck]

Ominous and beautiful. Great piece.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[TPK Stories]

Love the expression in this. . .beautiful! :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

be thou demon or be thou angel? it matters not, for if you will love me, i will fly away with thee...excellent write, Tarry!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Lover Of Words]

All i can say is wow great job

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you