Morning Light

Morning Light

A Poem by Tarry Franck

The morning dew
Twinkles with the sunlights rays
Birds chirping all around
With a gentle breeze
And kittens wrestling on the ground,
I take off my shoes
And walk among the dew,
The feel of Mother Nature
Below my feet
Gives me sensations
I thought I would never feel again
For the simple fact
That I've lived a world of sin,
I thought she would reject me
But she welcomed me instead
Now I can live with proper thoughts
Whirling through my head.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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who's to say what is beauty and what is a sin? as far as i know, only humans proffer sin upon others. nature is both beautiful and giving. we don't own the earth, she owns us. and if we give her respect we are rewarded tenfold by her beauteous bounty. live as you will live, dear lady, and do not let yourself be judged by your fellow man...believe me, mankind is the least justified critic ....well penned.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much



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Sometimes the simplest things can renew our sense of self. Lovely poem my friend. It was very uplifting for me. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

5 Years Ago

Thank you KeelyJane
Great escape from the feeling of sin.
Dew is a source of sacred joy.
Very well poem.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing my new friend. Nice to meet you!
zainul

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome,my dear friend.
This is a great pleasure for me to meet such a fine poet.. read more
A confessional and a herald for nature - layers abound here Tarry and I can feel that dew also - well told.
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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much Anto
Nature has the ability to heal a well as reassure in our quiet moments with her in our presence. Lovely poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

6 Years Ago

Much appreciated
A.K.A

6 Years Ago

My pleasure.
For some reason, i heard music while i was reading this. This is so cool and relaxing. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

6 Years Ago

Thank you ghostwriter
I love it! A feeling of being renewed, a new day and all the negative feelings, struggles, gone from yesterday. Morning can be such a beautiful time.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much
I think this is great, I love how you made it seem the reader can see what is going on.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Each day we have opportunity to start anew. The strong description took me to a good place and personal thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

6 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote
Lovely words. Such beauty to see the freshness in nature.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

6 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend

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