Carry My Heart

Time makes love

Light like fire

The flames burn

With such a sensual glow

That only from friendship

Love may grow,

We've waited many years

To come together

And without you realizing

You have washed away many tears,

You have carried to my heart

And placed upon my face

Such joy and laughter

I truly embrace,

Wherever this may lead

I know not yet

But I'm willing to follow

However far these feelings may go.

Reviews

[Relic's Bare Trees]

The worst thing to do in a relationship is to rush. Being friends first is always recommended. Things take time in a relationship to grow and being at ease with someone is always a better feeling. This is a good example of such combination of friendship and love. Nice writing from you Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Blip

[Relic's Bare Trees]

You're welcome Tarry.

[Ohhhwillow]

Leading a friendship into a relationship can be make or break, it may be the best decision you ever make; however it may not be quite right for the two of you. This poem is perfect in length and flow, it is informal, a feature I struggle with in my writes - that I commend you on! I can imagine this read slowly and softly, almost as a Shakespherian soliloquy! Nice work Tarry :)

[OBWhiteHawk]

Lucky you to feel this love. Very beautifully done!

[buffalosoldier96]

very well written and lovely poem and you are able to capture the feelings of love into this writing. loved the last two lines that's what happens when you are in love.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much dear friend

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Love is friendship caught on fire. You captured this in your writing. Nice work!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Sharon

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Good to open our mind and heart. Journey with another and tried to find joy and happiness. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Coyote

[TPK Stories]

Once again tarry you've captured my feelings exactly ... in the words of Popeye. "Very romantical."

[Tarry Franck]

Glad I could - love the connection you and I have :)

[TPK Stories]

Lol!

[ANTO]

Can a friend be more than a friend without that friendship being doomed?
I pray that 'carry my heart' doesn't become 'bury my heart' Tarry.
This is a fine poem that I would be proud to have written
Well done

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Anto

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is sublime and soothing...I like the way that you allow the words to linger a little, which I think is a good metaphor for a strong relationship. We must let the tea steep before we drink it, you know? Love the sentiment and emotion here; so intrinsically honest. I do hope the best for this budding bloom...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much :)

[quinfinn]

sounds as if someone has kindled love from a long time friendship...those are the best kind! this is a very pleasant and obviously heartfelt delight to peruse. such a sweet poem. lovely!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Quin