Silver to Red

Silver to Red

A Poem by Sunflower

The Silver Ship,
Traveling into a deep Red Sea,
...
Has a map drawn on me.
Silver Ship looking through the sea,
The Silver Ship has it's anchor set in me.

A course carted so young,
Running through the roughest of storms,
...
Finding new territory to be torn.

Silver Ship looking through the sea,
The Silver Ship has its anchor set in me.

Longing to stop its trip,
Red waters ready for another release,
...
Looking for the pressure to be eased.
Silver Ship looking through the sea,
The Silver Ship has its anchor set in me.

© 2013 Sunflower


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Great work and love the last line...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*creepy voice* excellent...

Posted 6 Years Ago


I know this one was from a year ago but I really love it. Well done~

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice write...:).........

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

carted should be the word charted**

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this one

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really cool. The repetition works and the visuals are quite nice. Also lyrical.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the style of this poem.

Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sunflower
Sunflower

Garrett, IN



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