She Loves You

The pain left in her eyes,

Can be seen because your lies.

The hurt in her heart,

Will never be healed because you stabbed it with something sharp.

Why did you let her go,

Why didn't you just hold her close?

Did you not know how much she cares,

Did you even notice how much she needed you there.

If you would have just seen her that night,

You would have never ended it, due to fright.

She is nothing without you near,

She needs you to hold her close dear.

Letting her go, was that easy,

Or did you just do it to make her queazy.

How can you look at her and feel nothing,

You held her close, told her she was your everything.

How could you just let that go,

When she has still kept her hope.

Look at this from someone else's view,

No matter how blind, you could see, She Loves You.

Reviews

[Humor Me]

i um just read it again hehe :D

[....]

Such a wonderful rhyme scheme, much enjoyed the wording

[Humor Me]

sounds like you have been through a lot and i agree words mostly speak for you :)

[xSamilynnx]

wow ur really good!!!! i can relate.. gosh y do ppl have to hurt the ones that love them?? i mean seriously :'(....

[The Girl with the smile]

I can feel the emotion in every sentence of this poem. I can relate. Great write! Excellent rhyming skills!

[Paige Allison Willmont]

This is amazing, and I can really relate. Nice write :)

~Paige ♥

[Your Perfect Disaster]

I feel like this too.

[Andrea]

this is really well written. your voice is very powerful and you really get your point across well. (on another note my exboyfriend really needs to read this cuz this explains my current situation)