let me in.

a song i wrote on improv.

let me in.

so i know that you have gone through some tough times, 

the same kind we all go through in our lives. 

but i want you too know that you have me,

 i will always be there to dry up any tear you may shed.

so take me on, let me in. 

let me see what im missin'.

let me know that i'm not alone

 and you'll always be there to call a home

and i want you to know 

you feel like home

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beautiful write

[Neisha Ann]

This is precious. Another hit that would be on my music player. :)

[Claws Of Fury]

I like the metaphor "you feel like home" every time I read or listen to it, so good choice. It's very warm and every kind of audience can understand how home feels.

[CLosed]

Thats a sweet and loving poem

[Greg Skura]

Nice poem!

[Broken Girl]

Very sweet!

[Melody-Rose;]

that sounds really good :)